As I expected, the wind has risen. Gusts are booming in the chimney and shaking the pine branches so their moon-cast shadows wave at me from the western facades of houses. Hello or good-bye? The night has an oddly autumnal feel to it, though winter is nearly half over. I expect to hear leaves skittering down the street. One pine cone fell, hitting the pavement with a loud clatter as it rolled, invisible. I now hear the crunch of pine needles underfoot as I walk along the driveway. I'm sure this sense of displacement has influenced my choice of poems this week:
The Descent of Winter
by William Carlos Williams
9/30
There are no perfect waves--
Your writings are a sea
full of misspellings and
faulty sentences. Level. Troubled
A center distant from the land
touched by the wings
of nearly silent birds
that never seem to rest--
This is the sadness of the sea--
waves like words, all broken--
a sameness of lifting and falling mood.
I lean watching the detail
of brittle crest, the delicate
imperfect foam, yellow weed
one piece like another--
There is no hope -- if not a coral
island slowly forming
to wait for birds to drop
the seed will make it habitable
10/22
that brilliant field
of rainwet orange
blanketed
by the red grass
and oilgreen bayberry
the last yarrow
on the gutter
white by the sandy
rainwater
and a white birch
with yellow leaves
and few
and loosely hung
and a young dog
jumped out
of the old barrel
10/28
in this strong light
the leafless beechtree
shines like a cloud
it seems to glow
of itself
with a soft stript light
of love
over the brittle
grass
But there are
on second look
a few yellow leaves
still shaking
far apart
just one here one there
trembling vividly
no subject
Date: 2004-02-08 06:52 am (UTC)These have the feeling of haiku without haiku's obsessive-compulsive strictures.
obsessive-compulsive strictures
Date: 2004-02-08 12:03 pm (UTC)Re: obsessive-compulsive strictures
Date: 2004-02-08 06:46 pm (UTC)Re: Re:
Date: 2004-02-08 07:10 pm (UTC)We are doomed!
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Date: 2004-02-08 08:49 pm (UTC)